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Neqtan
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I just need an Artisits Critique on my avatar . I made it for a challenge .
But its kinda growing on me . I see flaws in it that maby only i see .
Have a gander at it please and give me some feedback if you will .
Look for a new signature from me within the week . Taggers delight !
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KANO
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It looks kinda amateurish if you know what i mean. But its good enough for a challenge but i wouldn't use it everyday.
Its not too bad though.
Thanks ViralCoder |
 
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2mb is a bit big for an avatar.
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spyware
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No likey:
Background is too dark (no detail)
Text is "messy"
Looping isn't cool (in this avatar)
Too BIG! (Size!)
"The chowner of property." - Zeph Widespread intellectual and moral docility may be convenient for leaders in the short term,
but it is suicidal for nations in the long term. - Carl Sagan Since the grid is inescapable, what were the earlier lasers about? Does the corridor have a sense of humor? - Ebert |
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Please, don't spam these forums with such insults to image-files.
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spyware
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st33l http://www.thebestpageintheuniverse.net/c.cgi?u=banish
I don't like genocide. Just gimme the candy. Peanuts!
"The chowner of property." - Zeph Widespread intellectual and moral docility may be convenient for leaders in the short term,
but it is suicidal for nations in the long term. - Carl Sagan Since the grid is inescapable, what were the earlier lasers about? Does the corridor have a sense of humor? - Ebert |
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spyware
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As in the thing coated in chocolate!
M&M's people 
"The chowner of property." - Zeph Widespread intellectual and moral docility may be convenient for leaders in the short term,
but it is suicidal for nations in the long term. - Carl Sagan Since the grid is inescapable, what were the earlier lasers about? Does the corridor have a sense of humor? - Ebert |
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Neqtan
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ViralCoder wrote:
If you really want to have an avatar like that, first try and make your name readable,
What is wrong with the lettering its graffiti lettering its not suposed to be that easy to read ! Or do you mean its blurry or something like that ?
ViralCoder wrote:and then reduce the framerate a bit, increase the compression rate, or whatever. It is way too big at the moment.
Increase compression !? How would i compress this and upload it to the internet and have it viewable as an image while compressed ?
Reduce framerate ? I dont know what you mean by this ! Decrease the
speed at witch they process ? Or reduce the amount of frames period ?
Anyone with a good answer can respond .
Thanks for all the feedback so far .
I agree its a bit of a rip off . It is from the hackers movie .
A bit noobish considering the quality ! But i didnt think it was to
horrible considering it only took me twenty minutes to make .
As to the quality of the image itself whats wrong with it ?
I agree with the fact that its background is dark but thats how i
got it off the movie . I could spend countless hours trying to
brighten it .
Anything else on this would be much appreciated . Not so much to improve on this perticular avatar , but just to improve my skills .
I can do some badass art on paper . But graphical art is so time consuming and tedious as of right now . Im down to learn though !
Im currently using adobe photoshop cs2 , the gimp , and Ulead .
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You don't understand the comments because you know nothing about GIFs or images in general.
That's okay though, you don't have to know everything.
"The chowner of property." - Zeph Widespread intellectual and moral docility may be convenient for leaders in the short term,
but it is suicidal for nations in the long term. - Carl Sagan Since the grid is inescapable, what were the earlier lasers about? Does the corridor have a sense of humor? - Ebert |
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Hmm. Maybe its just me, but I dont like slow things. It might be better if you sped up the animation. |
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